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12/27/07 10:47:45 (1 year ago)
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  • doc/nuxeo-book/trunk/src/docbook/developer-guide/index.xml

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    1010         xmlns:html="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml"> 
    1111  <info> 
    12     <title>Detailed development software installation instruction</title> 
     12    <title>Detailed Development Software Installation Instructions</title> 
    1313  </info> 
    1414 
    15   <para>This chapter is provided to help you installing some needed 
    16   software.</para> 
     15  <para>This chapter is provided to help you install the software needed to work on your Nuxeo projects.</para> 
    1716   
    18   <para>TODO: refactor because in many cases the packages may be installed using some package management system (for instance on Mac OS: <command>port install apache-ant maven2</command>).</para> 
     17  <para>[TODO: refactor this chapter as in many cases, the packages may be installed using some package management system (for instance on Mac OS: <command>port install apache-ant maven2</command>).]</para> 
    1918 
    2019  <section> 
    …… 
    198197 
    199198        <listitem> 
    200           <para>don't forget to click on ok to close the environment variables 
     199          <para>don't forget to click on OK to close the environment variables 
    201200          window.</para> 
    202201        </listitem> 
    203202      </itemizedlist> 
    204203 
    205       You can then check by typing: 
     204      You can then check that your installation is correct by typing: 
    206205      <programlisting>ant -version</programlisting> 
    207206    </para> 
    …… 
    246245      </blockquote> 
    247246 
    248       <para>Nuxeo holds a maven repository here: <uri>http://archiva.nuxeo.org/archiva/</uri>.</para> 
     247      <para>Nuxeo holds a Maven repository here: <uri>http://archiva.nuxeo.org/archiva/</uri>.</para> 
    249248    </section> 
    250249 
    …… 
    328327 
    329328      <para>The Nuxeo EP 5 source repository is a <link 
    330       xlink:href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Subversion">subversion</link> 
     329      xlink:href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Subversion">Subversion</link> 
    331330      repository thus you will need a subversion client to access the source 
    332331      code. Most Linux distributions provide the <literal>svn</literal> 
    …… 
    345344      <para 
    346345      xlink:href="http://subversion.tigris.org/project_packages.html">For MS 
    347       Windows, we recommend to use the SVN client <link 
    348       xlink:href="http://tortoisesvn.tigris.org/">TortoiseSVN</link>. You can 
    349       also directly use the Subversion client from <link 
     346      Windows, we recommend to use the <link 
     347      xlink:href="http://tortoisesvn.tigris.org/">TortoiseSVN</link> Subversion client. You can 
     348      also directly use the Subversion command-line client from <link 
    350349      xlink:href="http://subversion.tigris.org/">Subversion 
    351350      website</link>.</para> 
    …… 
    354353 
    355354  <section> 
    356     <title>Chapter key point</title> 
     355    <title>Chapter Key Point</title> 
    357356     
    358357    <para>In this chapter, we learned:</para> 
    …… 
    360359    <itemizedlist> 
    361360      <listitem> 
    362         <para>How to install a Java development environment (JDK) on your machine</para> 
     361        <para>how to install a Java development environment (JDK) on your machine</para> 
    363362      </listitem> 
    364363      <listitem> 
    365         <para>How to install Ant and Maven, two mandatory tools for building and deploying your own projects on top of the Nuxeo platform</para> 
     364        <para>how to install Ant and Maven, two mandatory tools for building and deploying your own projects on top of the Nuxeo platform</para> 
    366365      </listitem> 
    367366      <listitem> 
    368         <para>How to install a Subversion client, which is not mandatary anymore (but may may prove useful for you own sake)</para> 
     367        <para>how to install the JBoss AS 4 application server that will act as a container for the Nuxeo application</para> 
     368      </listitem> 
     369      <listitem> 
     370        <para>how to install a Subversion client, which is not mandatary anymore (but may prove useful for you own sake)</para> 
    369371      </listitem> 
    370372    </itemizedlist>